Wow! …Please don’t tell me this was never finished?

Oh…my…god! This is a good story.
Can’t wait!!

Thank you all for reading my story! and for writing a comment. It means so much to me!

Chapter three: read!
Eagerly waiting for chapter four!

Chapter two is taunting me! Must know the whole story!

Yes, we must know more of this!

Very unusual and so interesting story! Yes indeed, with such a father, it’s not unlikely that Faramir should reproduce the model.
I find your style and grammar pretty good for a non-native, so I don’t think you have anything to worry about! And I also quite like Gondor’s justice as you describe it in this story: a rather more feminist view than is usually met with. Thanks a lot for this story and please keep on with it!

Ic2, sorry but I don’t agree about Éowyn. Whatever she did, surely that wouldn’t give Faramir the right to hit her to the point of almost killing her?
But she was brought up with love, not abused by her family like Faramir. It’s not likely she should reproduce such a model. Besides, Elboron was hit too and no one would think to blame him. And anyway it’s too early to say no one blames Éowyn, perhaps we’ll know more about what happened later. The author is implying that Faramir did suffer a lot all these years he mistreated his wife and son. Perhaps his violence can be understood, if not commended, when we know more.

Thank you for reviewing! I will update once a week :)

Everyone blames Faramir. Maybe they should take a look at Eowyn.

Rather unexpected and intriguing view of our beloved Faramir. The tension is high, and I’m hooked. Thank you for sharing.