I was speaking of the exclamation marks in my comment :). Yes, I agree about Faramir. I wonder what happened to him. Head injury = dreams about taking the Ring? Mmmm…

What? I only just read this now and haven’t said a thing about exclamation marks. I was too lost in the story to notice.
Very sad ending, yet somehow more appropriate to Faramir than actually taking the Ring. That would be sadder still. Well done.

This was a lovely piece Moit!

What do you mean, Bell Witch “too many exclamation marks”? :P

Hi Moit!

Thanks a lot! Very impressive for someone who’s never even been on a ship! I feel terribly grateful because I knew the ship part might not be easy and I never dreamed to get something so detailed! The last part of the story is touching, poor Faramir! The relationship to his parents is insightful. Quite well-written, too. I’m not sure I understand the title, though :).

Anyway, creepy, Faramir having such dreams! And so many questions unresolved… wow!

You more than rose to the challenge, bravo! And thanks again!