Oh wow. Character death usually = me not liking a story at all, and I was hesitant to click on this, but I’m glad I did. It’s beautifully written, and the ending is fitting, I feel. Thanks for writing this.

…even in death…

it’s sad really. From my experience, I know it is true: “only the good die young. the evil Satan lives forever” (by Iron Maiden)

thank you, balrog, for taking the time to comment on almost all my fics!

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I loved it. When you find your fist love, you never want to leave it but join it. Thanks.

Seven minutes! My, it generally takes me that long to construct a single sentence. Well done! Looking forward to seeing how you give this a positive twist.

(And does anyone else keep hearing ‘Feet first, it’s the only way…’?)

thank you… I was feeling very stressed about this story.I love it, even though it’s dark… and I hoped others would like it too.
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Heart achingly beautiful and passionate! 7 minutes? We call it a story “told within one breath”.