thank you so much for your feedback, i’m sorry i didn’t see it till now and show my gratitude. i suppose mean is good, though devious and desperate were perhaps more toward my intentions. but that’s what’s wonderful about stories – how they can be interpreted in different ways. thank you for sharing yours. :)

A very mean story as I think was the intention.
Really good.

thank you very much. i appreciate your feedback and kind words.

It one of the best story I’ve ever read, masterful. Thank you

thank you so much for reading. i appreciate your kind words. and yeah – i’d take that prize any day.

Very subtle, a creepy and devious Aragorn and Faramir, but then who wouldn’t be if Boromir was the prize.
Wonderful – many thx